tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-343118022566219248.post2065116773614088675..comments2013-11-01T21:39:43.718-05:00Comments on Ashley M.K. Writes: The ChoiceAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04211116766535162643noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-343118022566219248.post-44266560223214607042013-11-01T21:39:43.718-05:002013-11-01T21:39:43.718-05:00Thank you for the feedback! Originally, I was plan...Thank you for the feedback! Originally, I was planning for him to have saome sort of brain tumor, which is why he was seeing a doctor, but at only 1,000 words, there just wasn't time. So now I leave it up to my lovely readers to decide what was killing him and causing memory loss.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04211116766535162643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-343118022566219248.post-67749192579792968402013-10-30T16:55:53.567-05:002013-10-30T16:55:53.567-05:00You did a really good job with the 1st Person Pres...You did a really good job with the 1st Person Present. Generally, I can't stand present tense. But, I hardly noticed it, which means everyone was flowing, and moving at a good speed.<br /><br />Does make me wonder, though. Why didn't he remember? Hmmm.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com